What is prison like?
May be, some place
With no place for hopes,
No hopes for dreams,
No dreams to escape,
No escapes to be cheerful.
A gloomy room,
With little space,
Unending darkness,
No spark of life,
And engulfing silence.
Prison must be like this,
Where one can shout but not heard,
Where freedom can only be imagined,
But never to be achieved,
The soul of men die in this prison.
3 comments:
Felt kinda incomplete.. like something was missing.. ended on a very melancholy note, but nonetheless, it was good.. but not as good as ur other writings..
Good work anyways.. !!
God...don't scare me!! :P
write sumthin cheerful girl....this one sounds depressing :D
nice one though..have to admit that :)
thanx ansh , u always encourage me ,, even though i may write all crap :D
vivs ,thanks!! cheerful , yeah rite .. i'm working on that part .. something or the other always goes missing :S
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